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Clean Sweep

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I just finished cleaning my apartment for what I sincerely hope will be the last time. Since I'm moving out, I had to make this a really good, thorough cleaning. Meaning I had to finally clean all those little nooks and corners I've been avoiding.

It reminds me of something I've noticed in my writing. My writing group has been giving me good feedback, but often they point out things I knew before ever submitting the story. Things I knew were weak or downright wrong and did not fix out of laziness.

It sucks to get down on your hands and knees and clean that crevice behind the toilet, but one of these days you just have to man up and do it. I've been avoiding those spots and now it's time to clean them.

I often complain that others hold back or aren't honest when giving reviews. Well, the same should go for me. When editing, we need to be honest with ourselves as well. If you notice that that sentence or scene is weak, so will everyone else. The challenge is not passing over it and leaving it for a second read; the challenge is attacking the weak spots the moment you see them and cleaning them up then and there.

In the spirit of having just cleaned my entire apartment head to toe, I'm going to try to keep that mind set today as I work on editing some more. But first I'm going to take a nap. Cleaning is exhausting.

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[info]clarionj wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 03:16 pm (UTC)
But first I'm going to take a nap. Cleaning is exhausting. Hahaha. :)

I regularly experience exactly what you're saying here. There is sometimes a laziness involved ... knowing something isn't right and not fixing it. And it's odd because I'm not sure it's a matter of not WANTING to fix it, but needing someone else to point it out???

I've recently found that if I write something in a word doc, for example, and it seems okay to me, and then I go to post it on LJ or to a friend, all of the sudden it looks entirely different and I'm fixing things I let go before. That's one reason I'll post rough drafts up here. I go back and look at them in an hour and think ... WHAT is that?!
[info]misha_mcg wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 03:22 pm (UTC)
That's true. That's why I like posting my story a day here, in public. It forces me to make more of an effort than if I was just scribbling something down to get it done each day.
[info]jongibbs wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 03:36 pm (UTC)
'When editing, we need to be honest with ourselves as well'

Excellent advice, though not easy to follow :)
[info]misha_mcg wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 03:37 pm (UTC)
Not easy at all!
[info]bogwitch64 wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 04:41 pm (UTC)
Fabulous analogy!!!

You're absolutely right. I love this.
[info]tracy_d74 wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 10:03 pm (UTC)
yep, sounds about right. my readers will come back and point out that stain that i have been covering with a blanket for months. frustrating. i joke and say i need to get betas who can overlook stains . . . but gotta do what's best for the story/apartment.
[info]misha_mcg wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 10:43 pm (UTC)
Definitely. Sometimes it takes someone else pointing it out for you to get in gear and take care of the problem.
[info]wordsrmylife wrote:
Aug. 6th, 2010 11:20 pm (UTC)
Found your post on jongibbs. This is a great analogy, one I'll remember the next time I revise. If it's got to be done, 'twere well 'twere done immediately.
[info]karen_w_newton wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2010 12:32 am (UTC)
Love the way you go straight from cleaning toilets to writing critiques!
[info]elspethcross wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2010 09:24 pm (UTC)
Exactly! If you are wondering about something, then you can safely assume others will too.
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